pretty good, one thing that stood out was at the end. You kept saying "was she look" the correct way to put that would be "did she look", you could also say " was she beautiful" "was she sexy" Trả lời · 4
pretty good, one thing that stood out was at the end. You kept saying "was she look" the correct way to put that would be "did she look", you could also say " was she beautiful" "was she sexy" Trả lời · 4
khá tốt, có một điều mà đứng ra là lúc kết thúc. Bạn cứ liên tục nói ", cô đã nhìn" cách chính xác để đưa rằng sẽ là "đã làm cô trông", bạn cũng có thể nói "đã được cô xinh đẹp" "là cô sexy" Trả lời · 4